As the creature Varkiam was sighted all around the world, something else happened. The French were experimenting with a new weapon that uses both nuclear energy and electricity combined. A small scorpion on the island that was tested on was mutated into the creature Crarnerm. Varkiam entered the Japanese mainland and disapeared after reaking havoc, but not on purpose, on accident. Varkiam was targeted by the Japanese military, lead by Yamaki Hirosino. Eventually, Varkiam disappeared somewhere, but as the monster left another arrived. Crarnerm, driven mad with pain, was shooting at everything and destroying everything. Then, Varkiam rose up again and fought off the beast. After a hard fought battle, Crarnerm was destroyed by Varkiams beam of destruction. Varkiam dissapeared again and the military kidnapped the remains of Crarnerm.
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The legs could be a bit stronger looking so it's more believable, the head is getting better, and the detail is increasingly getting stronger. You still need a bit of work, and the shading isn't so bad. Next time you do a bio of a character, be sure to break it into chunks so it's not one big boring block such as this comment.
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Ok, paragraphs, I'll do that if I edit it. I knew that the legs were crap and the shading sucs, but thank you for your critique.
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